Once upon a time on the planet of Tabaloogadoo (pronounced ta-ba-loo-ga-doo), the entire planet was populated with gorillas. And they had a hero (can you guess who it is?) and his name was… GORILLAMAN. But there was a problem on Tabaloogadoo, all the gorillas were dying! And it was up to Gorillaman to save them. There was an anti-dying thing on planet Plopytuku (pronounced plop-ee-too-koo). And so off Gorillaman flew to the planet.
Meanwhile…
“Waaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!! It’s just not fair!!!!!” screamed Dr. Grape. “Gorillaman always beats me!!!!”
“Papa! Papa! Great news!!!” Dr. Mini (Dr. Grape’s son, i thought that even Dr. Grape had to be a role model for somebody…) chimed. “Gorillaman is going to Plopytuku!!”
“What?! Why?!” questioned Dr. Grape.
“He’s looking for an anti-dying thing, since all the gorillas are dying!!” stated Dr. Mini. (if any of you have any suggestions on a better name instead of ‘the anti-dying thing’ feel free to comment i will seriously take it into consideration… i couldn’t think of anything better… not the most creative person in the world… -_-)
“Hmmmmmmm…. The anti-dying thing,” contemplated Dr. Grape. “This could be of some use to us, son. I need to think about this for a while. Leave for now, son.”
“Yes, Papa,” replied Dr. Mini, who was excited as to what would happen next…
TO BE CONTINUED…….
i kno i’m evil… hehehehehe ^_^
anyway i’m serious about better names…. it annoys me that i can’t think of a better name but i think all my creativity went with the names of my planets… i kno its scary at how uncreative i can be… oh well… oh yes a reason about why Dr. Mini’s name is so very unoriginal I WROTE THIS STORY IN SCIENCE CLASS… yeah so science interfered with my creativity also…. and i will also like suggestions for Dr. Mini’s name also if you don’t mind… i feel his name isn’t as awesome as it could be…
well that’s it for now!!!! keep looking for the second chapter!!!!
see ya later!!!!! XD








June 11th, 2008 at 3:58 am
the tabaloogadoo device!
June 14th, 2008 at 5:23 pm
e_e
You hate me, don’t you? xDDDD
August 19th, 2008 at 4:58 pm
‘The anti-dying thing’, lol! I like it, it’s funny.
Dr.Mini..reminds me of mini me.