I did not like my other prologe alot so Im gonna remake it.

Here it is
Prologe
?: Noo! It cant be….This chaos is the worst so far. It will take more than powers to stop it. Much more.We will need help. Lots of help.Lets Just hope a miracle happens.But what if this plan fails!?For me to have the power to fix the stuff I did wrong. IT WILL BE HARD! Not easy at all.Not any power will be able to fix this.Any.I hope a miracle happens. Ok. Lets go. Ummmm Lets see. WHERES MY BLINDFOLD!!?? ugh. Umm lets see. FOUND IT! (Puts it on) Now to see, whos the one that the chaos shall seek. Who shall make the clouds the color they should be. The sky that shall once again be nice and blue. And the orange grass and the green sun, well. Its chosen. Alex Jefferson. A poochyena??? ok! But something just does not seem correct. Not ok. I know!! Ok. This desicion shall not be mine. This desicion shall be someone elses. Something. DNA shall make the desicion. Ok. I guess my work here is over. In a year or two, It shall happen world. It shall….
Chapter 1
2 YEARS LATER AFTER THE PROLOGE.
Mrs. Twink: Oh Harry, Our baby girl….
Mr. Twink: I know, The ugliest minun you have ever seen. You said it ten times already
Mrs. Twink:Oh but Harry!
Mr. Twink: Its no big deal.I wasnt the lovley man in town when I was a baby minun!
DNA. Belle. DNA.
Mrs. Twink: But harry! When I was a baby plusle I was lovley, I still am today. Im a famous model you know??
Mr. Twink: Yes, I know. Im your husband! SHE WOULD PROBABLY GROW UP BEAUTIFUL EH BELLE?
Mrs. Twink: Your rigth Harry, But I still want to take her to the doctor.
Mr. Twink: Doctor, Shocktor! Who cares? I only care about naming her.
Narrator: You probably dont get whats going on here do you?
Well, Mrs. and Mr. Twink just a baby minun. (girl) But the mother was deeply shocked when They saw theyre baby.
Her fur was white as snow. And her ears, hand, and tail, Was dark, dark, blue. Well anyways!! Back to the story.
Mrs. Twink: FINE! Marrisa Twink.
Mr Twink: Hmmm…..Marrisa, Smooth name. I like it!!
Narrator:After she officially became a part of their world (A land where pokemon rule and no one knows a thing about humans) Mr. and Mrs. Twink went to their cottage. But as she became 4, And returned from school. She always came with A+ Papers. But never a smile on her face. When they asked her how was the school day, she replied, “The usual” (Getting teased, Bullied, Ect) And went to her room. But at nigth in supper, she always stared the explorers of team Pokiunus Explore as they pass her house, Hoping one of them to catch her eye. I think all of them have catched her. But I dunno!
TO BE CONTINUED.
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