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Hey guys! Just last week, I went to Lake George for my Grandparents’s camping trip with my cousins. This story is a little version of my trip. In this story, Kitty was excited about going to a nearby lake for a boat ride with her friends. But, after a horrible nightmare of going there, she doesn’t want to go, but she can’t let her friends down.

Kitty’s house, Kitty was relaxing on a cool evening brushing her cat, Charmmy’s fur

Mimmy: “runs into the bedroom”  Kitty! You gotta see this on Tv! Look! The day you been waiting for is almost here! Lake Shin-ta has a new attraction! It’s wide! It’s fast! It’s extreme! The Boat Xtreme! Opening tommorrow only in Lake Shin-ta!Mimmy: Kitty! We have to get to bed early, so we can be first in line!

Kitty: You’re right! Well, off to bed!

Later that night..

Kitty: “dreams of the trip to the lake, walks to the new ride, gets on, and the boat moves super fast and crashes on a rock”

Kitty: “Screams” I don’t wanna ride the Boat Xtreme!

Morning..

Mimmy: You ready to ride the Boat Xtreme?

Kitty: “yelps” Sorry, it’s just that I had a bad dream last night.

Mimmy: Me too.

Kitty: What was your dream about?

Bus to the lake arrives

Kitty: Let’s go, Mimmy!

On the bus..

Kitty: Wahoo! The Boat Xtreme!

Kuromi: “Sitting on the seat in front of Kitty and Mimmy’s” Yeah, Kitty! We’re all riding the Boat Xtreme.

Chumi: I heard that there was guy who rode that ride and he was sent flying far way.

Kuromi: I hope I get flown out of the boat.

Chumi: Me too!

Mimmy: That boat sure is really scary. I mean fun, really fun!

Kitty: Yeah, fun! :{

At Lake Shin-ta…

Kitty: “Looks at the Boat Xtreme ride” Woah! “gulps” The line is somewhat long.

Mimmy: Let’s go ride the other rides first, that way, the Boat ride would seem even cooler.

Kitty: Yeah! And buy soveniers, too!

3 hours later..

Kitty and Mimmy: Yeah! One more time!

Melody: You know, that’s the line for the bathroom.

Kitty and Mimmy: Ohh.. “blushes” :{

Melody: Anyway, I got off the Boat Xtreme and I looked at the pretty fishes down at the bottom and I was going fast and..

Kitty and Mimmy ran off

Melody: Was it something I said?

Kitty: Look, Mimmy, It’s Cinnimora “Pointing at Cinnimora”

Cinnimora: Howdy, girls! I got off the Boat Xtreme and man, it was a rush! “Sniffs self” Smell that? That’s the smell of excitement! “sniffs Kitty” Kitty, I’m not smellin’ your excitement on you. You haven’t gotten on the ride?

Kitty: Uh… It’s because…I’m…Hungry. I’m very Hungry! “Wails” Hungry!

Cinnimora: Alright, Mimmy! It’s you and me!

Mimmy: I’m hungry too! “runs away”

At the snack bar…

Mimmy: Eat anything?

Kitty: No. Uh.. You got chocolate all over your face.

Mimmy: I’ll go wash up. Be right back! “walks to the bathroom”

Chumi: What’s the Matter, Kitty?

Kitty: Oh, friend of Kuromi, I don’t know what to do.

Chumi: You can’t let your sister down. You girls are family.

Kitty: I know, but the Boat Xtreme is really scary.

Chumi: Well, I’ll give you scary! “Swipes Kitty’s Ice Cream and hits her with it”

Kitty: Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow!

Chumi: You like that? You like that?

In the restroom where Mimmy is finished washing her face, while chatting with Kuromi

Mimmy: What’s the big deal of that new ride? I can do it!

Kuromi: “taunts Mimmy” No you can’t! You’re a big chicken cluck!

Mimmy: Oh yeah! We’ll ride with Kitty and your friend and see who’s the bigger chicken.

Meanwhile..Chumi is still hitting Kitty with an Ice cream cone

Kitty: Ow! Quit it! Ow! Quit it!

Mimmy: Kitty! I have to tell you something!

Kitty: Me too!

Attention everyone! Lake Shin-ta will be closing in 5 minutes!

5 MINUTES!!??

Mimmy: We have to hurry! Let’s go!

At the Boat Xtreme..

Mimmy: Kuromi and I have a bet on who will be the bigger chicken of this ride.

Kitty: Ohh… That’s unique..

Last call on the Boat Xtreme!

Kitty: Well, this is it! “Steps in on the ride” Mimmy.

Mimmy: Yes?

Kitty: I’m scared of this ride and I don’t want to tell you because I don’t want you to be disapointed on me.

Mimmy: I was going to tell to the same thing!

Please keep your hands and feets inside the boat at all times

Kitty: Here we go!

AHHHH!! “Ride starts”

WAHOO!!!

3 minutes later.. the ride stops

Kitty and Mimmy: “sobs”

Kuromi: Stop crying! Yay, Chumi! We won the bet!

Chumi: Girls, It’s over. You can get out now.

Mimmy: Again?

Kitty: Again!

THE END

What do you think? In my vacation, I went tubing on a river and went to the Lake’s villige. I wish I could show pictures of my trip, but I don’t know how to do that. Lake Shin-ta was something I made up. Oh, and Chumi is a real character who belongs in Kuromi’s gang, The Kuromi 5. More to come and thanks for the comments on my last entry!

4 Responses to “Lake Adventure”


  1. Luv the story! i luv the kuromi 5, you should use them more!


  2. Thanks, Weiner! Really? Do you really love the kuromi 5? Have you even heard of them? 0_0 And sure, I’ll make more, you’ll just have to be patient.


  3. Yea, i know who the kuromi five are, I watched the show on youtube, but it was in japenese, but i found soem with english subtitles. my friend says i am the mouse O_o


  4. Sorry for the wait to answer your reply, School and what not. You should tell me more about them! Like, I get their fav foods, birthdays, fav color, and skills, but how about their main personalities and genders? Did the videos say anything about them that you have watched?

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