more of my story and comment plz!!!!!!
ive been having writers block so im just gonna try to write more!!
When Esmerelda looked up from the note her dad slipped her, she saw her best friend Marc standing in front of her. Marc was born in Greece and came to Chicago when he was 2, but he went back to Greece every winter break, so he never lost his Greek accent. He had really tan skin and black curly hair. And he knew her better than anyone in the world. So, of course,he knew what was up by the look on her face
“what did your dad do this time?” he asked.
She handed him the note. While he read the note, she scanned the sidewalk for her father, but somehow in the 1 minute it took for her to read the note, notice Marc and give the note to Marc, he had disappeared.
He had a wierd habbit of doing that.
like i said i made that up as i went so tell me if its any good or if i should delete/re-write it.