I don’t think we’re going to be hiking and camping for a while since that bear incident. and i’m glad. I don’t wanna get attacked by bears or smell May’s stinkbomb again. I’m just gonna go…to…my…bed… and relax…………………………………………………………………………………………………….

Trevor:fiona? fiona?? FIONA!!

Fiona: AAAAAAAAAH!! WHERE’S THE FIRE?

Trevor: fire?? no, fiona, no fire. But i have some bad stuff to tell you. May’s gone.

Fiona: w-what? Something must be wrong with my ears cuz it sounded like you said may was g-gone.

Trevor: I did. I searched everywhere and I couldn’t find her. I even looked in the place she excersizes. She wasn’t there!!

Fiona: OMG! where could she be then!!?! (gets up and starts running around) MAY! MAY!! MAAAAY, WHERE ARE YOU!!!!?!!!!?!!!

trevor: It’s no use fiona. I already tried that. you know, you’re a heavy sleeper. I was yelling out “may” really loudly right next to you.

Fiona: oh. my mommy and daddy told me that but i didn’t believe them.hehehe. well, if may isn’t here, where could she be? did she go on a hike and not come back? maybe she just went outside to excersize. maybe she-

Trevor: FIONA! wow, u can be annoying sometimes.

  Where could may have been? Trevor and I checked everywhere that may would be in. She wasn’t in her excersizing place, she wasn’t in her bed, she wasn’t outside planting flowers. where was she? While trevor an i were at the garden, we heard a faint cry. like a little voice yelling “help, help me” then, trevor and i looked at each other and yelled out ” May!” We knew it was her.

  Trevor ran so fast. He was like a race car at top speed. But me, I was like a turtle compared to him. Trevor just ran through the bushes, he got some cuts, and he was yelling out “may! maaay! MAY! WHERE ARE YOU!!?” All of a sudden, we heard a big roar. it came from behind a bunch of bushes…i think. i finally caught up with trevor and we both approached the bushes.

fiona: should we go in?

trevor: i don’t know.

fiona: well, i am. we have to help may

trevor: ………………….

fiona: bye trevor. oh yeah i forgot to tell you. you’re a big chicken. bawk bawk bawk!

trevor:(blushes) i am not! fine then, I’m going too! are chickens brave? no, i don’t think so!

fiona: (that chicken tricks works every time) hehehe. ok. lets go.

  So, Trevor and I went in the bushes. When we got throught those gicantic bushes and…….we didn’t see a thing. There was no 50 foot monster that had 8 arms. There was no mutant bear. There was chihuahua and wolf eating monster. But, there was  a black and white little animal in mud. W-wait, why was it sinking?

Trevor: that’s quicksand!

Fiona: ?????

Trevor: quicksand…it’s like mud but you can sink in it and die.

Fiona: ooooh. we have to help it out of there!

Trevor: wait a minute, that’s may!!

may: aaah HELP!

  I didn’t know what to do. So, as usual, I started running around and barking. I have no idea why I do that. I just….panic. Trevor was looking around for something. He was looking for a long stick. When he found one, he told May to grab on to the other end. she did. I was still running around and I accidentaly tripped on a rock and landed in the quicksand.

May: FIONA!

Fiona: I’M SINKING! I’M SINKING! I DON’T WANNA DIE! I’M STILL I LITTLE PUPPY!

Trevor: it’s ok. I’m gonna get both of you out of there. may, hold on to the stick. (puts stick in mouth and lets may hold on to the other end)

May: (gets pulled out of quicksand)

Fiona: HELP ME!

Trevor: hold onto the stick!

Fiona: (gets stick and gets pulled out)

May: ewww. I’m all muddy looking!

Fiona: ewww. me too!

Trevor: what were you even doing here, may?

May: …… i…umm…I was looking at my secret place.

Fiona and Trevor: secret place?

May: ya. this was my secret place.

Fiona: wait, what was that big roar that trevor and I heard before?

May: oh, that was my stomach. i was really hungry. this is where i keep all of the food that I know chihuahuas and wolves hate.

Trevor: ok then. well, let’s go back home.

Fiona: you should’ve told us about your secret place.

May: but it wouldn’t be a secret anymore…….would it?

Fiona:oh….

  I made a bunch of posts and nobody comments. I’m really sad. Do my stories suck? do I need to add something to my stories, like another character or change the names or something?

  Plz, just read one of my stories and plz comment. Comment and you could tell me if there is anything that I should do anything to my story to make it better. plz, i don’t have a lot of comments. ;{ That would help me a lot and make me feel soooo much better. thx!